[RR] Well, This Is Kind Of A Copy.
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Well I have never played any of lordeldar's games and to be honest, when I saw the thumbnail I thought to myself, "Eeer, another sketch kind of game". Well enough about that lets get to the review.
First of all I just want to say that I'm sorry if the review is not long, it's just that there is only one level and there isn't really that much to say. Well as I said before I wasn't to excited when I saw the thumbnail because so many of these "Sketch" kind of games are featured and now kind of getting old.
The first problem about this game is that there is only one level, and in the begging of the creator one level was fine but at the quality of games getting published now, minimum of five at least. I was many flaws to the game when I had already started and that's not a good sign if lordeldar was looking for a featured game. Yes the sketch part did look nice, but that's not what editors are looking for, they are looking for the game play result and I never got any good game play of the Art Contest and that was really disappointing.
I really wish that lordeldar had made this game more fun, there were silly mistakes, for E.G. The enemies didn't move, they were stationary, and that's like so boring if you were looking for an action game, and if loreldar was looking to make a action or puzzling game, then I'm sorry to say but you fail in doing so. I am really disappointed in the quality of this game, and it's really upsetting to see this kind of game made like this.
Another bad flaw to this game was giving to much health and that is un-necessary for all you had to do was get "Coins". There were 4 lives given with 2 penalty chances plus in the game there is a life given, So that equals to 10 lives, which is way to much for a one leveled game, and this flaw made another flaw, because now you didn't have to worry about dieing because it's basically not possible, so now that gives you the chance to just ram through the enemies which there for make this game really boring with no (action,puzzle or fun). There are so many flaws to this game, it's like a chain reaction of flaws, (One flaw leads to another). In this game since the enemies don't move they are in one possession under they floors and so on, "it is impossible to get through there without having to touch them", which means yet again there is another flaw to this game. I'm sorry to say but this game has got no feature worthy qualities and there for this game wasn't good at all, I also want to say that if I have offend loreldar I'm really sorry but the truth will always help a person and hopefully this will show you and maybe you'll make a feature worthy game one day but just not now.
Ratings out of 5
Again I apologize if this review was short, but you didn't give me much to work with. Anyway there was so many errors in this game that can be improved to make the game play/action/puzzle of the game so much better and a possible feature. Overall, loreldar the Art Contest isn't a good game. Hopefully when you read this review you see it as constructive criticism and not me trying to make you look like a noob, because that's not what I'm trying to imply.
Things you could do to improve
First of all there should be a minimum of 5 levels if you are looking for a featured game, second of all there was an over use of lives, third the enemies don't move and they are impossible to get past without actually losing a life. Last of all you should add in puzzle to make the game more interesting and addictive so that the person playing wants to play more.