[BHR]Hopefully This User Will Now Stop Asking For A Review.....

the escape of prison alcatraz is a game created by gamemelody

Alright this was requested in the BHR thread. This user practically post this game every thread she opens. It gets annoying. I decided to give it a try to review, hoping she'll stop posting it.

Gamemelody doesn't seem like a great game maker, but I haven't really played a game by him/her. Melody acts a tad childish on the forums so I don't know what to expect. If he gives me a good first impression, I'll start liking and playing every single of of his/her games.

Game Play

Well, you start off in a little hallway. First you attack a bunch of bats and ninjas and all that. Then, you just go straight up the stairs, get a key and go back down. Really boring. Enemy placement was terrible. In my perspective, if your going to put down enemies, at least make them so you have to kill them. All I did was jump over all the ones that I couldn't take. Continuing, you would go through the blue door, then you could just jump right over the Thor, get the green key, and carry on with life. Then you just go up, though a tunnel, into this water area. There is 1 of those big ninjas waiting for you. Well, there is a way you can kill it without losing any health. Then you keep going, use your sword to climb up this wall, and jump over a few turrets. Gets boring. Then you get to a part where you have a couple choices. First of all, terrible Hazard placement. The ice spikes were placed so they couldn't even kill you. What is the point then? Then, he wants you to "fall" through a couple weak blocks. Pfft, I ran back and forth from each side several times before they broke. It was just way to easy to get past. I would have changed it so that you had no weak blocks, and you had to jump across. Would have been a tad bit harder. Then you just jump across three platforms to the escape pod.

Now, this game isn't AS bad as I made it sound. I've seen worse, I've played worse, I've actually made worse when I was a big noob. Gamemelody hasn't been here to long. This ain't a bad game for a newbie. I made worse games. I made games similar to Glass Of Coke when I was a newbie.

There was one good thing to this game that kept me playing which was the uniqueness for a noob. Not many people make games with changing the tile, and when you see that, it usually means that they put work into it.

Suggestions

1. Add more scenery and details.

2. Don't place your enemies so you can just jump over them and carry on.

3. Make your game longer and harder. As in long, about 4-8 times the length.

4. Take advantage of being able to place hazards in your game. Actually use them so it is harder.

5. Add some puzzle to make the game harder and eliminate people's chances of winning.

My favorite part

The water part with the large ninja. Probably was the spotlight of the game.

Ratings

Meh, Gamemelody, you should improve after a while. :D